All Comments on 'Resort - Scenario A: Pt. 1'

Very HOT! Great handling of Tanya and Dan’s repartee as counterpoint to their sex. Although I would like to have heard more from Tanya about all the right spots, positions, and feelings she enjoyed and could only experience from Dan. And while that makes for some fun fiction, attitude and skill can get men of any size even farther. All in all, I liked it a lot better than Resort Ch. 01 - The Setup.

Was really hoping that Tanya would come out on top. But i guess it wouldn't be a cuckold story then.

@12356416514a all in good time, my friend. I tried posting an explainer for how my Scenario stories are going to work, but the moderators said to post it to the forum. Frustrating but what can you do.

Anyway, stay tuned!

@summercrush, thank you for the encouragement. Was a little disappointed in the rating but I’m glad someone is enjoying what I’m trying to do. Appreciate the insight as well. Will certainly try to add that in. We’re far from done with Tanya, Dan, and their significant others

So so tedious...OMG this is crap.

@anon, still early in my writing efforts. Eager for any advice/criticism I can get. Thanks in advance!

Your writing and plotting is too good not to be over a 4 rating (I gave you a top rating, which I don’t give lightly). I imagine some feminists and probably some guys were just offended by the theme and size issue, dragging your rating down.

Thanks for the reply and don't let the comments get to you or influence you to much lol. Also I wouldn't worry too much about the ratings either. Her on literotica there are many people who give all cuckold related stories 1 star without even reading it just because they hate this genre.

Looking forward to the next part.