by StoryTeller1450
It was hot but could use a little additional material (maybe 25% longer).
If the protagonist is straight, you could go a little more into how he feels.
The trucker could have used blackmail in some way to ensure the protagonist has to return.
Grammar and spelling were good.
Would have liked to know if the trucker was hairy, how his nuts and dick smelled, and more. Otherwise, good story.
As another noted - it would have been hotter if the guy was straight and more force and/or blackmail was involved.
The thing is - back over 45 years ago - I've been there and done that... I always thought I was straight but, between drugs; alcohol; hitchhiking; and my supid hard cock... There was many a trucker who had their way with my smooth boyish ass and cute fuck mouth....
It seemed that being forced and punished was my sexual turn on... Sigh... Still haven't gotten over it...
Good story. I read it because of "rest stop". When was in college I would hitch rides to home in NY. One night near 290 in Mass. I got a ride from a trucker, we had been talking maybe ten minutes when blowjobs came up, I said I had a lot. He asked if I ever given one, err no, but maybe, yeah I'll have to try that some time. It must have been the weed I smoked earlier but he pulled off the Pike at the rest stop near 84 and I sucked his cock and even swallowed his cum. Most of the ride home I thought , WTF I sucked his cock. When I cock out later, I thanked him for the ride and the experience. Only time for me.
I am going to go to the rest stop just up the freeway. I hope I see that trucker. :)
I don’t know why in a porn story the victim has to have a little dick? Guys with average or even large dicks can still be forced to suck cock and take it up the ass by a guy with an even bigger dick.