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All Comments on 'Retiring Boss Has Last Dance'

by Satsumabook123

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Would be an awesome story without the cuck angle.

LikesToWatchHerLikesToWatchHerabout 1 year ago

This is a very good story. The only mistake I caught was this: "it did peek my interest...." Should be "pique." Looking forward to the next chapter!

Syra_panSyra_panabout 1 year ago

A very sweet and wonderful story, I loved your main character and you paint wonderful pictures with your words.

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I am a very amateur writer. For a couple of years I wrote lots of stories just for fun, not showing them to anyone else. While I do make every effort the stories will contain many errors as I am dyslexic.The stories will never win any awards but I hope that many of them will b...