All Comments on 'Reunion Birthday'

by ToddM2007

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
What the hell

Her husband is waiting in the parking lot and doesn't catch wind of what's happening.I don't think so !!

chastenchastenabout 12 years ago
Might use an editor

You switch between third and first person at one point. You're missing some quotes. Etc.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Believe It

I should believe they had sex while hubby was waiting in the car? they wanted it so badly that they could not find a more private place and a better time? So, now she walks back to the car dripping all the way? I don't believe this plot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
nice work author

You got some closet cuckolds ranting and flaming, but as chasten said, get an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
beyond Excellent

No idea how the "openly" cucked will vote but "closet" cucks will complain and say they voted 1 star, as if that shit is fooling anyone. Damn self-loathers are becoming farcically comical in their denials

UndrApprctdUndrApprctdabout 12 years ago
Needs to be More Interesting and Comprehensible

OK?

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
HAPPY BIRTHDAY AND

heres a 1st time gift. TK U MLJ LV NV

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 12 years ago
I think this is a good romance story but not a loving wives story

I was confused while reading the story, trying to figure out, if this couple was married or were they cheating on their spouses.

I reread the story and found it to be a very loving romance story, and very sweet with no concept of cheating on anyone. Just two lovers having sweet sex after a long period of time of not seeing each other.

The confusion was all on my part. A preconceived notion that I had

Thanks for the read

DWornockDWornockabout 12 years ago
Nice but too short to be a story.

Therefore, 3***

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Your scores

Your scores are too.high for this abomination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Loving Lovers

Great story! From start to finish I was jumping from one wrong mental picture after another. What started out as just another cheating wife story evolved into a strong but tender emotional love scene by two people truly in love. Risking all for just a moment of urgent passionate sex.JCzmx4

iameaseliameaselover 3 years ago

Shes a skank and no way the husband wouldnt know what went on.

Not a good story at all.

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