All Comments on 'Reunited Ch. 02'

It was nice to see Leyland find his soul mate. Hmmm It is always strange to me to think what part of them is the soul that is the same? If they are a different person all together, what is the same in them? But, I guess that is a pretty hard question :) It was nice to see some of the twins and Celeste too. I think Wendy got to you when she said to watch overrun sentences lol. There were many places that two short sentences could easily be turned into one. Some of the paragraphs were a bit short. I think 4-5 sentences is the standard (I could be wrong, haven't been in a school in a long time) But overall it was a nice, sweet story.

I loved it, now for the twins, can't leave them out.

Great continuation, Willie! I like the idea of the soul mate coming back and found that to be very endearing and sweet. You set the stage for some awfully romantic scenes given that their souls know each other. And I would love more on the twins! Heck Mick sounds quite dashing too. Hint hint hint.

Keep up the good work and keep writing! The more you write the more you learn and I would love to read more of this story line soon!

Would he be designed after someone we know?