All Comments on 'Revealing the Kinks Pt. 02'

by JackRanging

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great story - we need part 3!

Loved these two chapters...more needed.

luvtodoitluvtodoitabout 3 years ago

This is getting interesting. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Getting better

This story is getting better and better. They are both learning about themselves and by sharing these adventures they will get closer and closer together,

I’m surprised that butt munch 26thNC hasn’t posted his typical bullshit to this story. Maybe COVID got him. We can only hope

mattenwmattenwabout 3 years ago

I'm glad that this nonsense is getting weaker and weaker. I thought you'd make a good story, but it just keeps getting weaker. Yes, except for the hardcore fans who like this kind of crap, there won't be any applause. It is also inexplicable to me why young people who are already unmarried friends need others to explore their sex life. Maybe it's because today's young people are too stupid to explore their sex life in pairs. When I met my wife, for the first 40 years we didn't even think about including others in our sex life, we always had enough with ourselves . And we didn't just do missionary work. We also had the full range to ourselves. But we were curious enough to explore it ourselves!

JackRangingJackRangingabout 3 years agoAuthor

Mattenw, If you don't like my stories, don't read them buddy! It's not like you paid for it, or for any of the other stories you spend your time crapping on. You do realise this is a fictional fantasy right? Or are old people just too stupid to explore an erotica site to realise this...? How do you know this is a young couple? This couple be a story about two 60 year olds, I never said they were young. Or whether it was real.

I notice you don't write any stories yourself, want to give that a go before having a pop at other people and the way they live/write/fuck?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Part three?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Loved it, can't wait for more. Everything was hot, she wants to watch her husband suck a cock after getting fucked..wife and I have the same fantasy

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

more!!!!!

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