All Comments on 'Revelation, Penetration, & Swaps'

by magmacdowel

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NellaBarely2NellaBarely2about 7 years ago
My grandmother would say ....

OH. MY!!!!

But before she could say that we would have to revive her, and ME. This is such a well developed series of events - hard to believe the author can describe the 'plans' in lengthy details while the actual hard core action occurs in a few paragraphs. In truth, each of us wonders after being penetrated, how and why it didn't last longer. The pain and pleasure of fucking may 'feel' like it takes a long time, while in reflection after the fact it was really too quick. Truly riviting story. I love the way your mind works. Betting you're one sexy, often sought after lover.

Tony Clarke. In N TX

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please

Write A LOT more

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