All Comments on 'Revenge!'

Well, I've dumped a lot of women for a lot less than that. 10 stars for great writing and a great story. Women are all a bunch of cheating whores. They will do anything that they think they can get away with. Buster2U

Shouldn't this be in the LW category?

MC made the bed and now don't want to sleep in it? He shared her in the first place, which was stupid beyond belief, but now he change because his wife realizes he is nothing but a sissy wimp cuck? The cheating skank whore is nothing but a worthless slut who should be dumped immediately but this husband is a complete fool. Bad story all around.

What did he expect? Give them an inch and they take a mile.

I would have preferred a BTB warning, in which case I wouldn't have read the story.

I've read this story before. Plagiarism isn't a good look on you

What a Loser to even let her fuck any other men to start with. So if she would have only done it in front of you, that would have been ok? What a born cuckold, that you only get up set when he can see it? I'm surprised she didn't have you eating his creampies!!

huh, what did you think would be the outcome

No revenge here ! You should change the title.

Did I miss the rest of the story?

There are hundreds of literary critics named Anonomus. Maybe they should write some stories so people with real names can critique them!

It was headed for a 1 but they pulled outta the nosedive and saved it for a 3

You are man now

He lead her to believe he was OK with being a cuck. What did he think was going to happen?

Damn straight M. F. er You better recognize. WHAT! WHAT!

🙊🙉🙈💨😈

Kudos for the surprise ending to this Femdom agitprop fantasy.

You finally got some balls, I salute your solution to this problem of the decietful wife. This is what happens with sharing that is allowed to stray out of the confines of the original rules. Good to get her back in line. You should have taken her sexually that night as well, nothing like a rage F&ck

Suntandcupl, Author

"There are hundreds of literary critics named Anonomus. Maybe they should write some stories so people with real names can critique them!" - – —

I bet they do! But what makes you think the names you see on Literotica are real names?

I for one don't want, yet another account, for yet another thing on-line. It has become ponderous to keep up with all of the accounts created just to do or look at something on-line. The single best thing about this site is the ability to peruse it without having to set up an account.

And what is with the anonymous bashing mentality here? Sure some of the commentary can be off putting but I've seen that from named commentors too. I have also seen very insightful comments coming from the great unwashed anonymous. To be frank (not my name) most of the scathing comments I have seen were pretty much calling a spade a spade (just an old adage, don't read anything into it). There has been some truly awful stuff printed on the pages of Loving Wives. Who knows what goes down in the other categories, as I scarcely ever look at them.

And while cuckolds are trying to mainstream their choice in lifestyle, it has always been regarded as a fetishism. Seriously, who wants to raise a family with mommy having a bunch of boyfriends and daddy keeping the kids on Friday and Saturday nights? At some point they're gonna ask why mommy always has sleepovers with other men. That's no way to live and no way to raise kids. Even though Michael took a stand in this story he's still a cuckold. Worse, he's a willing cuckold who who is in denial about his fetish.

Finally, you produced a story worth reading—or with something different from your usual story line. Five stars, at last.

Well that escalated quickly...

I do admit she upped the cuckolding relatively quickly since the last chapter so I'm not completely surprised at his outburst

With that said, while some people in the comments will say they like the new direction, I'll go the other way and would prefer if she didn't dive deep too quickly but I was liking the way it was heading with them slowly pushing his boundaries. Honestly, I think most people would've preferred that because this is literotica after all lol. So those loving wives category haters always commenting as if they're expecting a novel and they're not just here to jack off

I have come back to read a couple of your earliest stories. I have read all of the other ones. I just don’t get this you set her up, what did you expect? She wanted to be single with him and acted like she was and with your permission. She’s a slut and you’re allowing her to be, the first time that you saw that he was at his house without your knowledge or consent you should’ve gone over there and beat the fuck out of him and drugged her ass out naked all the way home. Know it’s fast-forward to your chapter 13 ending and she’s going to cuck you again.

Things have been gradually getting out of control over the last few chapters, despite the ground rules that Lucy and Mike agreed on. At this point there is no way he was going to be insulted and humiliated to his face by one of Lucy’s college-age lovers. This will not be the end of Lucy’s wanton ways. Fabulous series.

Cuck breaks bad and whoops the bull’s ass.