All Comments on 'Reversal of Fortune Ch. 02'

luved the interaction as the rich white milf becomes so very submissive and open. how much more will she become a new white slutty?

An excellent chapter! I think the girls should eventually cut out the middle man, Antoine, and set up their own business. Pam can run the operation and Stan could be a second arm of the business. :-) Amy x

I assume they are on the pill, though you did not exactly specify. You definitely need to put a lot more preg risk sex into this story, and perhaps both have a trick baby, and both can charge extra for not only going bareback but going unprotected as well, especially to some rich black dudes.

I do love it that both turned into hookers - most excellent! Now about two pregnant hookers? And will Erica graduate from her ghetto HS with a big baby bulge showing? Total white trash!!!!!!!!!

The cigarette stuff is oddly specific, kind of weird to keep mentioning it over and over

Really good, keep it going!

Definitely keep exploring husbands new role.

l really love this story. the plot is so great.

I'm looking forward to the next chapters

I loved it. Picturing a white woman smoking while fucking is so hot!!!! And now with young Erica smoking and fucking is just double pleasure for me. Keep the story going.

So far so good. Looking to part 3. Is Alexia and Erica going to work as escorts maybe put on a mother/daugher show. Well here's hoping

so far a great story, looking forward to chapter 3 & beyond.

What a story! Glad both Alexa and Erica started smoking mmm mmm mmmmm

I love your stories penpal! This is a good one. I love the direction into bad behavior as well.

Keep on rocking penpal! Love the drugs/smoking in the background of the sex

Anyone can write a sex scene. Your stories are different because of the corruption, the smoking, drugs and tattoos. So I hope you don't change your focus to just sex. In fact, I'd love to see even more focus on body mods and corruption!

Please keep writing my favorite writer on literotica.com

Thanks ImSick, Anonymous User and others for your encouragement. Reversal of Fortune Chapter 3 is about 3/4 written and should be posted in a few weeks. I think you'll like it!

you write more than just a sex scene you are almost writing an erotic novel.

keep writing and I would suggest trying some more extreme stuff

please let mom do a gangbang with her huge tits

Not sure if this was about interracial sex or smoking…