by mandywilluk2000
Though your paragraphs are sometimes a bit long for the backlit, scrolling screen (6 to 8 lines max) you tell a good story. You really get across the mental struggle of the mother, torn between desire and fear of taboo. The end was a bit abrupt and I thought you needed a para or two more to cover the post-climactic conclusion. Anyway, thanks for a good read.
could be the start of a nice series, very well written and very erotic.
You are good at expressing the emotions and the conflict the older woman is feeling. It was well written and sexy as well. Keep on writing.
...that's how this story has made me, Amanda.
It's been a while since I read the series and now I'm reading it again, with the same -inevitable- results, if you know what I mean :)
Seduction/coercion and giving in has always done 'it' for me. And you do it so well...
This is really bad. "1*" !!!
Damn good story. Keep up the good work and hope to see the next part of the series.
call me im wet we will have a lesbian threesome
3 bitches alone in a bedroom
i will bring my strapon
Wow! So Hot! Hot! Hot! Sammi admired and craved your mature woman's body, and you unknowingly lusted for her youthful athletic body. I was a dedicated young gymnast, prior to an injury. However, as a curious 18 year-old, I was willingly seduced by an older woman. She was my physical opposite, but it's funny how opposites attract. I was the California beach girl, tanned, blonde-haired, and blue-eyed, 5' 2" tall, 34B-24-34 and physically fit, with developed thighs and calves. She lived near a beach I hung out at in the summer, Sandra sensuously and sexually awakened me. Beth in California...
Such a well written, erotic tale.....I love reading lesbian milf stories , but the reverse
is even better. I can't wait to read on.....
This is a well written story: very steamy and descriptive. I just love it when a Milf initially resists and then gives in to her sexual urges. The reader can almost feel the heat between these two women. I hope Amanda becomes a complete and utter sex toy. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Absolutely loved the slow build up. Very well crafted so far......
England is full of those perverts. Goddamn lowlife !
This is a gorgeous story, well written and very sexy , please tell me of more like this, thank you
Hi im Jess
This is a so so sexy story
Cant wait for next episode
Beautifully paced buildup and a wonderful climax - all perfectly narrated! Thank you!