by humanfootrest
Well written. Love it! F/f findom is so rare but so good. Hopefully, future chapters will contain more semblance of realism, e.g, Victoria voluntarily gives Her millions (so they can both be rich) as well as her submission but Kristy slowly takes it all as She plunges Victoria into the depths of submission, service and humiliation. Also, got to try to get around the federal gift tax. Hot story. Make it more real!
Ps-bobbycull55, it’s spelled “ridiculous.” :)
Plot line: 5/5.
Writing style: 2.5/5.
It's something I'm excited to see develop, I just hope it's better written - by the end this was just a screenplay.
Part II is in progress. Thank you for your patience! I just submitted another story called “Heather’s Finsub.”
Once it’s approved please check that one out too. Part II to this story is almost done!
Part II has been submitted. Part III is in the works. Thank you for your patience!