All Comments on 'Rift Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Loved the story!!

Please keep writing add'l chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

great another male on trans story. Like there arn't enough of those already. Please, please can you get back to doing what you do best. Sorry if this sounds harsh but I usually love your work

SilverPlatedSilverPlatedover 4 years ago

I was super pumped to see the second chapter of this story posted and you didn’t disappoint. I’m loving watching Rift interact with us earthlings and especially enjoying the dynamic between the two protagonists.

JessicaAlexanderJessicaAlexanderover 4 years ago
Humanizing trans women

Thanks for writing a trans character as a real human being and not some fetish fantasy. She’s just a girl with something extra and dealing with the BS of close minded people.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Another Straight Boring Story

basically everything produced in trans porn, sorry Phoenix I usually like your stories but this is the only series I skip. But I get it, you need to cater to that audience. I was once considering donating to patreon, but if the content is gonna be all like this my $5 is better spent elsewhere.

phoenixcindersphoenixcindersover 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback

Thank you all for leaving feedback, it is much appreciated. If you'd like to discuss it further, please feel free to drop me a message through my profile and we can discuss this story and many others in detail. Thanks, much love! Phoenix Cinders

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Ignore the haters

Personally, I welcome this type of story. I'm not as "into" the whole trans-on-male story you seem to write, and was going to give up on your content, until I came across Rift. I know relationship pairing comes in all variations, but I strongly prefer transwoman as bottoms, with a hefty dose of love thrown in the mix. So, please, keep writing. Different strokes for different folks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
You write well but...

..too many of your stories don't start at the beginning and don't have an ending at their end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Love it

Excellent story so far. Ignore those some of those who just want a read where it’s just sex so they can get off. You put time and effort into your stories and it shows. Love this one and it’s now one of my favorite series. Keep them cumming 😏

smoothsatinsmoothsatinabout 4 years ago

I really enjoyed it I just love your writing its inventive and so well structured its a delight. thank you. Isabella.

PS. I tried to rate you love it but it did not seem to take. Issy xxx

DeLord12804DeLord12804over 3 years ago

I enjoyed what's been written so far, I only hope you haven't written yourself into a corner. I'm hoping for a third installment...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great start, very interesting premise and I do like the characters quite a bit. I like the fucking even more ;) Well kidding aside while the world building is great and the characters engaging (once you get past his initially asshole phase :P ) your sex scenes could stand to be longer and more detailed. Though they are not poor either don't get me wrong.

Anyhow really enjoyed this lots, I prefer M on T stories even though you usually write about the opposite. So I doubly hope you continue this story at some point. Either way keep up the good work.

dork42dork42about 1 year ago

Thanks for the series, great twist on the Superman tale. Just would like to add another vote to picking this back up. It's been a while, so doubtful but I do hope you return to this.

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