All Comments on 'Right Down the Line Pt. 02'

Great chapter!

5

Beautiful buildup. I really enjoy watching your characters unfold. Looking forward to more. Thank you.

I love this line: Now, let's show these men why they're glad we cooked."

Great chapter.

I agree with dwoelfle. I love watching your characters unfold. And, I will add, develop.

THANKS

Darn it! I read it too soon. I should have waited a few days for chapter 3! This is one of those you like to find complete so you can binge! Only to hate when it ends! Great chapter indeed!

Cheers

SAGE

Nice pace to this story. Thanks for this!

Yes. Another good chapter. Thank you. (Im)patiently waiting for the next instalment. :) Thank you

Nice continuation of a wonderful story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

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Great chapter! 4.8*

Excellent story and loving it. You are a very good Author and know how to present all the aspects of beginning a new relationship. Beautifully done, thank you! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

Great story, love the slow burn. Please get the Gerry Rafferty lyric right.

Great story and characters building up to hopefully a nice ending for Elaine and Cliff. Other than the crazy stuff in the first chapter it's almost been too vanila of a love story; I keep expecting for something bad to happen, kind of like real life.