All Comments on 'Rio'

by unknooown

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juicycarameljuicycaramelalmost 12 years ago
Oh-kaay...

Julian is a crazy @sshole, Kate is a crazy b*tch & i enjoyed their twisted dynamic...i may not understand it, but i enjoyed it. This was my 1st time w/these characters & tho it may b awhile, i have a feeling i'll b back 4 more ;o)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Amazing

Again, loved it and was really excited there was a new submission. Julian's getting even crazier and they're getting more public which is interesting. Keep writing, please.

AnomandarisAnomandarisalmost 12 years ago
Very intense.

A little darker than usual, but good. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Perfect

This is so perfect. You convey the twisted nature of so manu relationships well. Thus story in particular is my favorite one in the series and I love how after all the roughness he asks her gently if she's almost there

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
You are amazing.

Every one of these is fantastic. You're a great writer, the characters are real, the stories are gritty...not enough stories like these out there. You aren't too shy to be bold in your fantasy--to include violence and bullying and tears--and that is what makes these stories so real and so good. God knows good non consent porn is hard to find--so you rock!

jimjam69jimjam69about 4 years ago
Piece of crap

Julian deserves some serious punishment. Sick story. Little ladies getting abused does not make good story except for sick little deviant pricks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is my favorite genre, I’ve never disliked a story. I absolutely hated this, I’m sorry. I think you should try putting this in a different genre. This seems more bdsm than anything.

Like I couldn’t even read this and I love it when they’re more graphic.

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