by JackandJilldo
Came here expecting a 3 and got a 5. The suspension of disbelief was really really tough going, but you wrote it so damned well that it worked regardless of the unlikelihood of the situation.
I'm here for the noncon, which was really in the background rather than the foreground of the story, but I enjoyes it regardless. You whipped up some memorable characters and situations quickly!
This shit was hilarious. Don't say words like whippersnapper, dude. It makes u sound oooooold!