All Comments on 'Rise of the Demon Ch. 01'

Good start

Spend a little more effort on spelling and grammar. A good editor or beta reader can help.7

I am not going to say anything about the few mistakes I found. I do not want to insult your intelligence, I will say that I have often fantasized about becoming a wolf and love reading stories about them. This story has the makings of a great one. Please continue it.