All Comments on 'Rising Under Pressure Ch. 01'

More please, this could be a very hot n seksy story.

Hilarious! Loved it, and your style of writing. Don't make us wait too long for more.

Sorry sweaty but this story really isn't very good.

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Potential for future chapters. Needs to be a bit more descriptive.

Great start, shall you continue? Absolutely !!!!

Please do not pay any attention to an anonymous 'Sweety."

I am with the 80% that have enjoyed this set'up to summer, and await further episodes.

Thanks Everyone. I’m new to writing and am hoping to use a slow build to figure out who I am as a writer. I just submitted ch 2. Please be patient and I promise I’ll try not to disappoint. If you have feed back I’d love to hear it.