by tawriter
bunch of garbage how anybody with an I.Q. higher then ten could enjoy this is be on me,Then to write nine chapters of it shows how fucked this person is.
there's no other reason for writing 9 chapters of something like this. Poor standard of writing and zero plot.
I usually think that slogan is Bullshit, but I will make an exception in the case of THIS series. Maybe 8 chapters less! Or 9!!!
2*
Diarrhea of the pen. You should quit while you're WAY behind. This is just a terrible story.
Dogs fucking in the ally is more erotic than this stupid shit.
Nobody can have sex with 40 people in one day and not be horribly sore and infected with an STD. She certainly isn’t still going to be horny the next day. Also, nobody is going to progress from doing a little wet shirt flashing to a full blown hooker in a 24 hour period.