All Comments on 'Rob and Katie Ch. 01'

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Richie4110Richie4110almost 6 years ago
Great start

Looking forward to Ch 2.

Thanks for sharing your effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Can't connect to the ext chapter

A pity.... it was great till now....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Follow-up

A good start with believable characters had me intrigued. I am looking forward to the next installments

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

I think Rob should distance himself from Katie. Whether she admits it to herself or not, she strikes me as a ‘slut starter kit’, and if Rob was saving his virginity for her, it seems he’s deluded himself into thinking that it would matter to her. It’s a well written story and another chapter might change my thinking, but there doesn’t appear to be one.

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