by writergeek
A good start with believable characters had me intrigued. I am looking forward to the next installments
I think Rob should distance himself from Katie. Whether she admits it to herself or not, she strikes me as a ‘slut starter kit’, and if Rob was saving his virginity for her, it seems he’s deluded himself into thinking that it would matter to her. It’s a well written story and another chapter might change my thinking, but there doesn’t appear to be one.