by rm_writer63
Excellent story. A good deviation from the typical incest stories. I hope you do a Christmas sequel.
Nice twists and turns in the story. I knew it was coming she was fucking her son, so little predictable there. Having everyone get together at the end took some of the love out of the story, so a miss there. 4*
A bit different. Which is good. Really liked it. I only wish it was longer. And I hope they work out their plans. It would be awesome Grandma teaching Macy how to eat her pussy while Grandpa stuffs her. Then they could give her to her own parents as a surprise Christmas present. Just a thought. Five stars.
Jedd
Details. First you said Rob had a 10 inch dick, then you said a 9 inches, then went back to 10. You also need to proofread your work, or find an editr.
It was good enough, but you need to figure out his magical length-changing cock. Is it 9" or 10"? The ending was unnecessary.
I like the concept a lot, it is a welcome widening of the scope of incest stories. I wished it would have been longer, slower paced and more descriptive. Still a five stars story.
Well, Command F and replace didn't work. Other than that, what did you think?