All Comments on 'Rob Experiments with Mental Powers Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story line. Hopefully more to come.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

keep writing great job

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well written and very erotic - deserved and given a 5* rating

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

More more please 🙏

SomeoneblueSomeoneblueover 1 year ago

Always love consensual MC stories. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

“Precum was oozing out of his swollen circumcised head” conflicts with “ She gently tugged his foreskin up and down” a few paragraphs later. Great story otherwise, but maybe have someone proof read your content before publishing.

jdworks34jdworks34over 1 year ago

I love it so far!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Had so many plusses, sexy from 2 perspectives while still having the unknown mindcontrol.

Pls continue!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nicely done. I hope Beth will share, she's a nice girl like that. Julie deserves having her mind blown.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Incredible, hot as can be. I'd love to hear what else Rob can do.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

English teachers with no better grasp of English grammar than that should be fired!

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