by Codoc24
“Precum was oozing out of his swollen circumcised head” conflicts with “ She gently tugged his foreskin up and down” a few paragraphs later. Great story otherwise, but maybe have someone proof read your content before publishing.
Had so many plusses, sexy from 2 perspectives while still having the unknown mindcontrol.
Pls continue!!!
Nicely done. I hope Beth will share, she's a nice girl like that. Julie deserves having her mind blown.
English teachers with no better grasp of English grammar than that should be fired!