by masked_maiden
I see some mistakes I made (so please don't coment on the extra him and the, the that should be they) and I can re-edit it but as that will take the story donw for three days I will leave it here untill Ch 4 is up and then I will re-edit this one ok? I hope you like this one. :)
this is a very good story just that the update wait are a pain. looking forward to more.
This chapter is freaking AWESOME!!!! Worth the long wait!!!!! I have a feeling Markus is shitting his pants (figuratively speaking of course!)!!! I can not WAIT till the next chapter so PPLLEEAASSEE don't keep us waiting long!!!!! This is gonna be good!!
Well worth the wait. That was the perfect place for a cliffhanger. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I'm so glad you posted!!!! I love this story!!!! Please add more!
Nice to see the story continued. It was a great chapter. I really like how you allowed us to get to know the characters better. I would have loved to have found out that Roger had been around even more than he was while being the lizard. But I know he had to go away to learn to control his powers. The story is going really well and I look forward to another chapter. I loved the end when Roger accepts his challenge.
Isabella has been thru so much, but i do like rogers arrival, i hope that the fight is rather painful for markus and that maybe the folk get a chance to change
I can't wait until Roger kicks his ass and wins the girl. Hurry with the next story
Please finish this story, as you have me on the edge of my seat...wanting more!! I am wondering how you will finish, so please don't make us wait too much longer!!! Thank You!
Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it is as good as this one. Please don't let it take as long for the next one.
Please finish. Yes, I know you have a life outside of writing...lol. Thanks!
Hi all if any one checks the comments for updates here you are. My internet has been down. I couldn't enter Lit from the Libary's computers so. I have a few more days of writing (tieing up some loose ends) and then to send my next chpater to my editor so it may be a few weeks. thanks for sticking with me.
please please finish. i just started this story today and i love it. hope you update soon
my editor has Ch 4 right now so given the tradtional rewrite it should be up in a week or two. I am already working on CH 5 so hopefuly we won't have such a long delay between those two chapters.
hi
my editor was in the hospital for six weeks. That is why I am so far behind. it should be up by the end of the month.
I started a Masked_maiden page on Facebook hope to see you there.
ok I sent the rewrite to my editors and neither of them have sent me anything back a sent it to a new editor now. Hopefuly I will have it back in two weeks. but even if I don't I will post what I have. I just feel that now I have set a standard for my grammar and I dont' want to let any of you down just for the sake of a quick posting.
I am so sorry about all of this it is bothering me to. but on The up side CH 5 is done being writen so it should be up just a few weeks after Ch 4
I was just wondering how the next chapter is going, I really really want to see what happens!!!
I have submitted Ch 4 give it 72 hours from this post. hope you like it