All Comments on 'Rolled in the Hay'

No, it was not the most original thing out there but that doesn't make it any less well executed. I like the time you spent telling us about Laura, getting to know her so we could follow her thrill at the experience. Keep it up!

Good story, but as soon as you mentioned the sheep not be alarmed by the intruder, I knew instantly it was her boyfriend. I think it sorta ruined the mystery.