All Comments on 'Romance and Unbridled Passion Pt. 02'

In spite of some errors in grammar and punctuation, this is a truly wonderful story. We have in this chapter appealing characters, a good plot, and marvelous romantic atmosphere.

I apologize for the grammatical errors. Most of the time I was typing the story on my cell phone. That's not easy. Regardless, I hate that it distracted from the stories themselves because she deserves the best possible story I could write. I had never written before and she inspired it. Thank you for the kind comments.