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u know, a few minutes ago,i was chatting with my hopefully soon girlfriend, and i love her more than anything, and more than anyone could ever love someone, and i had told her a fantasy that sounded a bit like this story, i love the way u can write, both thumbs up, and plz keep up the good and romantic work

I usually do not enjoy short romance stories, but your tone captured me. One bit that would have made the read smoother ...her screams of "eat me"...

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