All Comments on 'Ronald Raygun'

Liked the first part, but the second was a bit odd. I think it was bec

Sorry, didn't finish.

I think it was because they skipped over, I had no idea what was happening, and by the time I understood you threw in a twist. If it had been clearer that the characters were trying to take revenge I might have been more excited. I understand writing is tough and sometimes a sudden ending is all you can get out. As a novice writer myself, I share your pain.

Just wanted to share some constructive criticism. : )

@Go2daWest

I thought I had given enough hints in the first part. Ariel says two or three times she wants to get back at Sofia. But I guess the gap between part 1 and 2 is a little too abrupt.

Well it's not like I put any effort into this story anyway. Took me like 4 days or something and half of them were no fun. I'm not even surprised it's my lowest rated.

Love this story. I enjoyed part one, was confuse about part 2. Can you make another one like this but with just Ariel Winter and Sarah Hyland. Or one with just Sarah Hyland going through some breast expansion. (Non-consent is implied because she had fun at first but things get out of control.) Just some ideas for fun.

@Anonymous Thanks but I don't think I'll write about this again. I'm tired of writing celeb stuff anyway. A last one is coming up and then I'm done and I'll go full futa (the stories, not me).

Also you can't have non-consent with celeb characters, Lit guidelines.