All Comments on 'Roommate Rules Ch. 07'

Another fun chapter. Going to all that trouble and throwing that fairly expensive housewarming party for Jacob was a total class move on the part of Terry so what Jacob did at the end was a complete dick move. If he thinks he is going to end up in a better place with a better friend then he is in for a shock. It is weird to see Terri act as wild and somewhat reckless as Brie but then in that town, nothing should really seem weird. I was also wondering if Suzies cousin (the vampire from the skate park) is going to be showing up since I figured this could be a great storyline to throw her in since it has nothing to do with the Pizza shop crew...just a thought. Thanks again for the 5* entertainment as always.

You have a good series going. Interesting plot line and you can take these adventures in any direction you want. However, you definitely need either better publishing software or an editor/proofreader. Doing so will markedly improve your presentation. Oh and lose the text message LOL at the end of sentences. Good luck and better writing ahead for you.