by Cognantreverie
I actually like the story. It shows that one person could be dealing with three of the same thing at the same time. Also it shows how dangerous dick is, Dick is reckless, dick is a dreamer and dick wants to be like Batman.
Church is the only non-shitty person in this whole story, makes me feel sorry for him.
Derrick and his girlfriend are pieces of shit too, but church’s girl is who pisses me off the most because she’s a manipulative conniving c**nt. Just because she Can she did... messing with Derrick’s head. And then the ending was so annoying, I know it’s a story and all but just everything about it read so fake, things I like about your stories is the probable chance of them being real, but this one just seems OVER THE TOP exaggerated...didn’t like this one at all. Sorry.
Not a bad story, tad bit predictable and the ending was a bit too on the nose. Really thought something more could have been done with the girlfriend and Church's girl. The conclusion of all of that felt very abrupt.