All Comments on 'Rose's Dolly Pt. 08'

love it

Fantastic. I absolutely love this series. Please keep them cumming - soon

I have been refreshing your stories waiting for each new dolly installment and i just wanted to say that your writing is unbelievably hot, you completely understand the kink and genre. Your work is amazing and your characters are super compelling

This felt unnecessarily abusive and unfortunately blew away most of the tension of the story. There doesn't seem to be a meaningful emotional connection between Dylan and Kim to salvage. There doesn't seem to be any remaining tension between Dylan's straightness and his spiral toward bisexuality. It even seems increasingly unlikely that Dylan will be able to form a meaningful emotional bond with Rose now with the third (and most abusive) rape of him. The only way I see this ending is with Rose getting raped herself such that she and Dylan can empathize with the perspectives of one another. Everyone otherwise seems too far gone.

It would be interesting to see Rose change tactics a bit. Perhaps a little tenderness to build an emotional bond with Dolly. Or to simply make dolly feel more comfortable with herself.

This keeps getting better. I would really like to see a more tender side to it though..

Chapter 9???

This is the finest smut I've ever read.