All Comments on 'Roshawna Becomes a Slave Maid'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

PLEASE MAKE MORE OF THESE

RevantoRevantoover 3 years agoAuthor

Anonymous, thank you for the comment and the emailed feedback. But remember that unless you include your own email in the feedback, I can't reply :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Nasty but in a worrying way. Didn’t like this.

mrfluffermrflufferabout 1 year ago

I gave it a five for how well you moved the story. However, I do wish you had a little backstory and not so rough to start. This could be a multi-chapter story..

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