All Comments on 'Rough Tongues and Sharp Teeth Ch. 03'

It's a great story and left me panting for more. I wanted to console Ivan myself. Who knows...maybe I will in my dreams tonight.

between the were's and vamp's. So, I'van's got another little secret-wonder what it is. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter but hopefully you will have spell-checked it. Just a thought dear because the spelling errors drag me out of the story and back into reality. Other than that, you've got a good plot and some interesting characters. I like how you switch p.o.v.'s between them, it's unique and gives me insight into each one.

Keep it up! Your story is very interesting, please continue.

i love how its written but im sad will had to die