All Comments on 'Roy and the Necklace Ch. 08'

Great chapter, not sure about the twin stuff but I’ll role with it. Can’t wait for the next chapter, hopefully it won’t be to long.

Not liking the twin stuff. Condoms were a smart idea until he figures out a solution. Really like the necklace and how it warps minds including the MC

Loved the chapter, especially the parts with the twins. I can't wait to see what he does to those two next.

I think you have good instincts, and the twins stuff is interesting, if difficult to get right

I find the frequency of the recurring terms "girl cum" and "girl juice" a little funny, but not not enough to distract from the rest of the writing

Not a fan of Kassy and her mother constantly using "tots" and "like"

Also can their bodies stop changing every chapter? I'm fine with the initial change but they shouldn't keep growing and growing. After his sperm or the magic changes them once it should be done

His dick is 16 inches in this chapter so just keep it at that as that's pretty damn big. Doesn't need to end up being 20 or something

Need to have more scenes of Kassy and her mother just blatantly doing something with Roy in front of Rob

Maggie should show the twins how to service Roy properly. Also in the beginning you mentioned how the twins have big bubble butts so Roy should end up doing anal with them

I hope his dick ain't going bigger, because even in fantasy you need to have some kind of limit to it. also please update faster thanks.

Please find an editor. The typos and grammatical butchery make it difficult to read and enjoy the story.

Keen for the next chapter keep em coming, can't wait for more twins transformations

Really looking forward to the next part. I keep comming back to check if the story has been updated XD

when is then next one please, really enjoying the story. keep up the good work!!! :)

Done, you're now going beyond ridiculous. You have clearly no idea that women would struggle to take anything more than 10 inches. Trying to take anything bigger would smash the cervix, causing intense pain and risking the woman from bleeding to death.

Even in fantasy, there has to be a limit you've now gone way beyond this, hence a 1 star.

Where are you man? You need to continue this story

To the Anon that talks about the unrealistic size, let me tell you that I dedicated the last sentence of the next chapter to you!

Haven’t read the next chapter yet, but hope you make the twins clean up their mom

I know this is just fantasy but a 18” cock? Come keep at least realistic.