All Comments on 'Royal Flush of Lust'

good start

A nice story. Keep it going as she explores new people and desires

Very good story. But the part with Jonathan ends too soon.

If you are talking from the POV of the wife, then don't write in the third person.

Also, you need an editor. Don't change tenses in your narrative; if you're writing in the past tense, don't suddenly change to present tense.

And some dialogues structure needs revising.