All Comments on 'Ruby Red Mistress'

Great SPH story. I do think this would have worked better as a standalone rather than tying it into the witches universe. The pacing was really strong and I was super hooked up until the witch intervened with the bullies. I think having the main character blow a load in front of the audience would have been a more satisfying climax for a humiliation story.

Hot story I really enjoyed it. Curious to see where it goes if you do a part 2. Only change I’d make is I would’ve had the leader of the bullies end up getting exposed and revealed to be smaller than the protagonist, instant karma.

Well written tho I feel for the victim in humiliation stories, but, needs a follow up part 2, disappointed that it doesn't since it engaged my interest.