by ElRoylk
Absolutely love this whole series! Looked forward to a new chapter each day.
Great characters! Hope you keep going, I'd love to see Anna get hers and how things progress with Rick & Loren - and Shelly.
Your only criteria as to whether or not something is okay appears to be if Loren uses her safe word. It appears to me that she is truly not able to use it appropriately and he does not have the ability to recognized this. For the sake of being able to push farther, you have made her seem damaged, not needy and discovering, and he is clueless and callous. I have continued through your story watching for growth in the characters. I am disappointed that it has not happened.