All Comments on 'Rules are Made to be Broken Ch. 10'

by ElizaGrey

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

!!! YOU can't leave us hanging like that! I really hope it's not long til the next chapter!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Gah! I was so happy to see another chapter and now I'm just a mess again waiting for the next one! Keep them coming please!

TalkSexyToMe2029TalkSexyToMe2029over 1 year ago

Now that's my kind of date but I could never spank a Dom tho. Even if he asked me to... That would be very awkward. *Runs away*.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Adorable.

whiterabbit0117whiterabbit0117over 1 year ago

One of the best stories I have ever read here. It really grabbed and held my attention.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

*waits impatiently for the next chapter*

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I've enjoyed this series and look forward to the next. It's almost as if I can live vicariously through Jessica/Amber. Well written and definitely worth the time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Stunning and so cute

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It's kink... but it's adorable?! And it's so good!

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you SO much for all your gorgeous comments! I'm so happy y'all are loving it!

TalkSexyToMe2029 - I'm not sure I could either TBH, I think the bubbles went to Jess' head! EG x

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I'm so glad she told him her name!!!

The build up to that moment was GORGEOUS!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Agree with the person before me - that build up was *chef's kiss*

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

Y'all are so kind! Thank you, I'm glad you liked it - it was an important moment, so I wanted it to be special! EG x

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Was literally WILLING her to tell him her name!!! Oh I love these two!

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

That makes me so happy to hear - thank you! EG x

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

She told him her real name!!!

Was waiting for this to happen, didn't disappoint :)

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

Ah, I'm glad you liked it!

Thank you for commenting, I really appreciate it :) EG x

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is like the greatest first (not) date of all time!

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

Definitely not a date ;)

Thank you for commenting, I'm glad you liked it! EG x

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A frustrating lack of sex for a "BDSM" story, but you're really good at writing flirting, I'll give you that.

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

Um, thank you, I think?!

I'm a great believer that a good BDSM story doesn't need to be all sex, all the time - especially not in longer form. EG x

cmj711cmj711over 1 year ago

So good, better than Pretty Woman, yet it sort of reminds me of that.

DINGDONG33DINGDONG33over 1 year ago

I have not commented on any or the first 8 chapters, because I wanted to read the whole story first then comment on the whole story. But you have made this into a Romance story and have the BDSM in for flavor. Very good writing. Love the Story and people in it.

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