All Comments on 'Rules are Made to be Broken Ch. 12'

by ElizaGrey

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

OMG!!! Even when they're not ripping each others clothes off I love these two!! More please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I don't think I'd have been that restrained.

My Sam crush is through the roof!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I am absolutely loving this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

One of my favourite stories I've read on here - I'm always happy to see a new chapter - thanks Eliza :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

*waits impatiently for chapter 13*

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Where do I join the crush on Sam club?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I usually skim read stories with no proper smut, but this is actually good even when there's no sex!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This feels like if Richard Curtis made an x-rated kink rom com - and I think that's a good thing!

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

"This feels like if Richard Curtis made an x-rated kink rom com" - new favourite critique right there!

Thank you all SO much for taking the time to read & comment - I'm so pleased y'all are enjoying it!

There's lots more to come, so please do leep reading! EG x

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I really like that this isn't just scene after scene & that we're actually getting to know the characters. Such a good read!

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you!

I love the kink chapters as much as anyone, but I think it gets kinda bland if that's ALL there is.

Glad you're enjoying! EG x

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Agreed - getting to know Sam & Jess better just makes the hot stuff even more FIRE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love that her wholesome bestie is basically encouraging her to lean in to all things deviant!

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

Yeah, poor Anna - inadvertently stoking the kink fire!

Thanks so much for commenting, I really appreciate it. EG x

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I really like that there's more to this than just the main guy and girl - really enjoying the extra characters!

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you, that's really sweet of you to say!

So pleased you're enjoying it. EG x

cmj711cmj711over 1 year ago

Pitch perfect, love this!

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