All Comments on 'Rules are Made to be Broken Ch. 20'

by ElizaGrey

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Every time I think I can't love this more, you post another chapter and prove me wrong!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I'm not saying I want them to fall out again, but fuck the making up is smoking hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Your combination of kink and wholesome is just exquisite.

So happy they're officially "dating!"

Jen X

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This might be the best story I've read on here, well done!

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

Jen - thank you, that's so sweet of you to say! It's a balancing act, but I love it, so I can't stop writing it!

Thank you as ever for the comments - so glad you're enjoying my story!!

EG x

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

LOVE that you made the point about anal being different depending on the person - sometimes it's a let down, others it's incredible - so true and real!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I just love these two.

The kink, the flirting, the banter, just all of it! So addicted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

They're OFFICIAL!!! :D ...so happy!

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you thank you THANK YOU!

So pleased you're enjoying it!

Thanks for reading - and commenting! EG x

subbyhunnysubbyhunnyover 1 year ago

The anal sex in this part is just so perfect.

My Dom is away til the weekend and I am fit to BURST!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Yeses!! I love it when anal is written as something enjoyable for the woman - when it's done right it's so fucking good!

This story is brilliant :)

stephinstokestephinstokeover 1 year ago

Arg! This came up at random and totally hooked me in - but now i wish i'd started from the start!!

(I'm still gonna, even if i do know what happens - cos that was HOT!!!)

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

subbyhunny - I hope this is helping pass the time!!

Anon - always!

stephinstoke - oh no! ...sometimes knowing what's coming isn't *all* bad though - I hope you enjoy catching up!

Thank you all so much for reading & commenting!

EG x

pennyrose123pennyrose123over 1 year ago

I so agree with the comments about the anal - so often it's made out like only men enjoy it and if it's done right that's just not true! X

edgeofglory99edgeofglory99over 1 year ago

My BF sent the link to this cos he's *desperate* for anal - gotta admit, it made me tempted!

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

pennyrose123 - I couldn't agree more!

edgeofglory99 - see above! (but remember, it's your call :)

EG x

cmj711cmj711over 1 year ago

This would make such a good movie!

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