All Comments on 'Runners High'

I like it. Even though I am not really into hetero stories :o)

Ellie

very nice, but either way win or loose she would still have fun hehehehe

Pha2TONY

a very nice trifecta--everybody wins-the winner, the loser and the reader. I enjoyed this very much and hope the author decides to post more of his work here.

I love all your writings :)

your tease pal willow

The changing verb tenses every two sentences and the sentence fragments just killed it dead. I couldn't get past the first few paragraphs, let alone get into the story enough to be aroused. And as if the story's time-traveling past-present-who-knows tense changes weren't bad enough, somehow you changed between first-person and third person in there, because the last paragraphs are she/her instead of me/I.

Please proofread or get one of your eager readers to do so. This might be a great story but some of us enjoy great -writing-, too.