All Comments on 'Runners High'

The changing verb tenses every two sentences and the sentence fragments just killed it dead. I couldn't get past the first few paragraphs, let alone get into the story enough to be aroused. And as if the story's time-traveling past-present-who-knows tense changes weren't bad enough, somehow you changed between first-person and third person in there, because the last paragraphs are she/her instead of me/I.

Please proofread or get one of your eager readers to do so. This might be a great story but some of us enjoy great -writing-, too.

I love all your writings :)

your tease pal willow

a very nice trifecta--everybody wins-the winner, the loser and the reader. I enjoyed this very much and hope the author decides to post more of his work here.

very nice, but either way win or loose she would still have fun hehehehe

Pha2TONY

I like it. Even though I am not really into hetero stories :o)

Ellie