by angelofdest
I did get a little confused between past and present scenes as well as trying to work out the practicalities of how he tied her to the bed in comparison to his next move of inserting a butt plug in her.
Otherwise the rest is pretty damned awesome! In case you were wondering that makes it another 5 stars.
Thanks for sharing
Tess (uk)
oh actually not a dead story. what a pleasant surprise.
Im looking forward what you come up with.
your writing style is rather unique, mixing past & present together and it somehow works.
I sure hope it doesn't take another 2 years for the next chapter. Interesting plot, a witch and a werewolf.
Flashbacks are hard to pull off successfully, but you do it pretty well, keeping the reader in the dark before giving away backgrounds. Could make them stand apart a bit more clearly, though. Where the start and end.