All Comments on 'Running into Former Crush'

So who was her lunch with, Laura or Katie? You mention thilem both even though she pretty much was only communicating with one friend. Proofread better.

Very well written... especially for your first submission. I'll anxious to find out what happens next. I'm thinking this could be a great BTB story.

I really hope this gets updated soon

Really hope part 2 happens soon

Oh my god. It's too good man. Waiting for part 2