All Comments on 'Rush Hour Crush Ch. 02'

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MandylionMandylionover 1 year ago

Wow amazing , there will be a part three?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This was one of best I read.

Expecting you to continue this story and develop the relationship by adding little bit of drama and spice things up by introduce daily life things and family relationships.

I would suggest you to write in little bit more detail and elaborate sex positions a bit more.

I am waiting for the next chapter of this hopefully long love story.

Thank you ☺️

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved it

Hopping to read next chapter soon.

Please develop character of Kiaran more bottom one with Chloe in the bed. And please add a bit family drama to the story plot.

Again it was a good one.

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