All Comments on 'Ruthless - The Devil's Dance Floor'

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PlutoburnsPlutoburnsover 1 year ago

Yo im actually getting invested in this little scheme and villain found family

furiousdistributionfuriousdistributionover 1 year agoAuthor

Then stick around my friend, cuz it goes places. I have no idea why I'm so inspired by this story, but I've got another 20K words in the pipe. More superhero weirdness, some corporate weirdness, and definitely sexual weirdness, all coming soon.

PornoclesPornoclesabout 1 year ago

You keep calling him a supervillain but I’m not seeing any villain behaviour.

It’s not even like he could be exploiting his employees like our present supervillains Musk and Bezos cause his employees seem to be robots.

Is it cause he’s throat fucking all his minions? Now that’d make Gru more entertaining!

furiousdistributionfuriousdistributionabout 1 year agoAuthor

It's an unfortunate side effect of not showing off Pythia earlier haha. Tho it's worth noting that he IS trying to turn over a new leaf, as it were, but still!

Not enough villainy!

I agree, actually haha. But these early chapters are still him getting back on his feet.

I plan to have more villainy later haha

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