All Comments on 'S(m)ister Wife Pt. 03'

by leeanna19

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itsnotjustmeitsnotjustmeabout 1 year ago

I like how the story has developed and love the forced fem on, but I do not like the demeaning way that Carol and Kristy are treated by Bob. I like the sensitivity that Carol has towards Kristy, but I think a better approach would have been that Bob was a loving, caring husband whom Carol wanted very much to please and that Kristy would see that and come around to also wanting to please him as only women could. Just my opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I have a feeling Bob will end up as pig feed!

SabrinaGLangtonSabrinaGLangtonabout 1 year ago

Ha, loving where this is going, it is so different from your other stories. I feel the husband has to be mean so the two 'wives' can bond, I think it is perfect so far...

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I write short stories. Mainly TV/CD and trans. Most of my stories and chapters are 1200-1800 words. I try to get to the action quickly. I know a lot of people just want to read a quick sexy story. I notice my trans stories get good ratings, but lower reads. I enjoy writing a...