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"Let's go home."
The end.
Author's Note: Thank you again to all who helped make this story possible. If you made it this far, I truly hope you enjoyed this tale and hope you will consider voting for it. As always, I love hearing from you. Please feel free to leave a comment or reach out to me personally.
Thank you!
- COMMENTS
bill7251over 2 years agoAs all the previous comments have stated, this was a remarkable story. By the end you touched on at least 9 Literotica categories and you did all of them justice. This was the last story you posted here. I do hope you come back and continue to share your writing skills with your many fans.
Anonymousover 4 years agoAn amazing story I couldn’t put it down I fell asleep holding my phone where I would read it from at first I was like holy crap 21 pages but like I said I just couldn’t stop
SomeDamnedDudeover 4 years agoRetell the entire tale from Ashleys first person experiences, but start from a bit of backstory elaborating on how her trip through Europe molded her into the free spirit tell all fly on the wall we find out that she is. Similar to how Homerotic did with Crash and Burn / A Mother's love. That would be awesome, again, just an idea.
SomeDamnedDudeover 4 years agoAn excellent story, minor issues with extraneous characters (letters) in the prose and a few missing words / wrong words. Nothing to detract from the overall story. Loved it, I found many sections that I could relate to that really hit me in the feels, hard. There were a few times when the "Jen" section seemed to move several days and the next character up only moved one and the flow seemed weird because of it. As for the request for more, maybe followup with Adam and Natalie / Lexie, Mark and / or Emily. There might be more to explore with Jon and Jen as they have both expanded their horizons and may be able to express what they want from each other better knowing that the other is more adventurous than their "pattern" of a marriage had trapped them into.
SolarRayover 4 years agoThis was a great story! What a great narrative to explore character development and transformations. The individual journeys were varied enough to provide several different erotic episodes and I thought Ashley was a fun binding element to tie them all together. Good job!
