All Comments on 'Sacrificial Lamb Pt. 04-05'

by UnderscoreRedhead

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

So let me see if I've got this straight. Good noncon, excellent world building with legit mythology, AND turns the table on the villain while finishing the story???? Chef's kiss.😘😘😘

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wow!

Part of me wants Fosta and Hemma to end up together… but I also enjoy how she turned the tables on him! This merits a sequel. Loved it!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This should not be the ed😩😩😩

We need more! Please….

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I love this story. I would really like true closure on her relationships with Fosta and Vizar though. XD

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I love your writing and your imagination!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I loved this story. I will definitely be returning to read it again.

My only disappointment is that it ended where it did. I would have loved to see Hemma develop a relationship with Vidar.

jra13jra13over 1 year ago

I read alot on here, all sorts, and this hit several different high points for me. As of now you have 2 works on here and I really hope you continue to write.

Brielle79Brielle79over 1 year ago

I wish there was more. I was absolutely enthralled in it. Fantastic job!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Where is the temple so that I can worship?

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Long time reader, first time writer. Completed stories: They Lie in Wait (9.2k words) A post apocalyptic future in which the world has gone dark monsters roam freely. Our protagonist, Star, has conflicting feelings about her budding relationship with Ben when a scream from ...

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