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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Good premised

Rushed. Seriously rushed.

No exploration of how long she'd been needing to dominated. No exploration of wether she watched Ds porn. Or what she liked about it.

Nothing with her breasts.

Nothing with her ass.

Except that he stuck his cock in her mouth she does nothing to him.

He never has her 'worship' his cock and balls, for instance.

He doesn't make her beg to be allowed to ake him feel good.

Sex is pretty much MEH.

Two stars.

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