All Comments on 'Safety First'

What a crew!

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Shuddering, not shuttering, unless the guy is a set of windows.

What a fucked up story. A swingers and swappers paradise story.

Karmas a bitch

Not a good ending

So why bother with marriage at all if you want the freedom to have sex with other people when ever you feel so inclined? Marriage provides no advantages over remaining single. You want a roommate with benefits to share living costs then get one and remain together as long as the living arrangement is advantageous to both parties. When one or the other or both decide to end the relationship then its easier to end the relationship and you don't need the governments permission and associated costs to split up.

Very uneven tale. Both Becky and Mandy are absolute sluts. And Mandy’s husband Rick is also a big cheater. Mark managed to extract himself from the debris with a minimum of pain. Obviously Candy eased his pain. Story suffered by not being clear as to when Mark discovered that Becky was a huge slut. There WAS an implication that he was cheating while away BEFORE he found out about Becky.

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Basically a collection of losers. Which made the epilogue about Becky meeting Pete and having a “normal” marriage with 5 kids totally bizarre.

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Barely 3 ***

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There's the bones of story, here, but it moves too quickly and the characters aren't developed in any way. What we see are two entitled women married to two men who don't react like most men would. Maybe they're Vulcans. There is also too much telling and very little showing, so it's more like reading a synopsis. OP can write decently, but just needs to flesh out the story. 2/5.

Just another shit story about vile women

I must ask, how does Becky go from a first class slut, fucking anything with a cock, one day, to a loving wife and mother to five kids the next? This should be in the fantasy category.

A collection of unlikable characters, none of which should have even considered getting married, and not one that's even remotely likely to make a decent parent, either. Truly abhorrent, top to bottom.

Hopenot...your writing skills are ok...I think the characters you portrayed had no redeemable traits. They all seemed to revel in chheating to scratch their respective itches. So why the fuck did they choose to marry in the first place?!!!

Everyone seemed to accept the infidelities a bit too easily. That acceptance doesn’t line up with the wives’ fears of getting caught, or with their outrage when confronted. Mark caught onto Becky’s behaviors, looked into it, and quietly made his exit plan. None of the other 3 had any suspicions… they don’t speak like morons, so did only Mark care? Again, that doesn’t fit with the initial fears or outrage.

Wow this was something.......🙄

Good for Becky, wow 5 kids with Peter and she cleaned up her act. Good on her.

She's knowing what the stakes are but still cheats on her husband, starting with a dinner. Doesn't want to kiss the guy 'cause that's for her husband, but thinks nothing of sucking cock. Didn't want him to fuck her missionary, afraid he'd kiss her, but wasn't afraid of the fucking otherwise. Rick having sex with with Becky? Sounds like all their marriages were fucked up. Mark, however, left the situation to find Candy before divorcing Becky. Just a terrible story with, except for possibly Mark, the characters were as bad as the story. 2 stars Bob

Humorous.

Interesting story. They switch lives.

"Let me ask you something: Do you love any of them?"" Said no man ever.

The stupid is strong with this one.

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