All Comments on 'Salt and Pepper'

Serious neurodivergence take’s nothing away from this story. More interested in Thomas than Jamie but this is pretty obviously Jamie’s story. Who’s next? What’s next? How long is the bike ride home?

Serious neurodivergence take’s nothing away from this story. More interested in Thomas than Jamie but this is pretty obviously Jamie’s story. Who’s next? What’s next? How long is the bike ride home?

@dnsontn I think I'm probably leaving that story there for now, but could return to either Thomas or Jamie in the future! I think they both have a lot of developing and growing to do and it would be interesting to pick back up with where their sex lives go when they're more comfortable with themselves

I love it. Jamie is so cool.

@sealandssd glad you liked it! Jamie's definitely not a good person but he is pretty cool, might write another story with him

Very well done. I love the dialogue; I love the realism of the situation, the uncertainty and second-guessing that each of them faced. I really wasn't expecting Jamie to be revealed as being a borderline sociopath. Now I'll have to go back and re-read it looking for foreshadowing. Meanwhile, I'll look forward to your next piece!

i would have rated this higher, but the ending was depressing. Those two obviously needed each other for more than a one night stand.